Slow motion love, starting details

So, step 2 in my process of writing is to start to take the actions and put in some description. Here, I will take each and start putting in the details. So you can see my steps, I have copied over the outline and will start putting them in sentences and descriptions. I will use the original outline, then follow with a : and put the sentences I am writing below it. Please remember, even putting these into more structured sentences is not the end. It will still be the unpolished version, lacking many details. More filler and transition will be added in the next revision, this is just the start of the polishing process.

In bed, me in nightie + panties, him in boxers:
Laying down in bed, me in my pink, slightly see through nightie, panties black against the pink of the nightie, him in his boxer shorts, grey, elastic waistband hugging his hips, holding them in place.

Him on side, put leg over mine:
His leg lifts, placed across mine, course hair tickling smooth, shaved skin.

Legs intertwine:
Lifting my left leg, I place it over his, our legs intertwined, flesh against flesh.

Kiss cheek:
Leaning over, his soft lips touch my cheek, puckering slightly, mwah sound forming as his lips suck in air while pressed against my cheek.

Put hand on opposite cheek, pull face towards me:
Hand reaching over, he pulls my face towards his, eyes locking with eyes, looking deeply into each other, his eyes occasionally flicking down towards my exposed cleavage.

Lips light touch, back, light touch:
His lips brushed mine, a light touch, feather soft, then left. Another touch, almost ticklish, before he pulled back again.

His tongue out, light lick on lips, light lick again:
His tongue flicked out, snakelike, and touched my lips before pulling back. It again came out, pink, to run over my lips, tasting them.

Press lips against, light press:
Lip to lip:
His lips came down on mine, solidly, but so lightly, pressing against my lips.

I kiss his bottom lip:
I kissed his bottom lip, sucking it slightly, teasing it, luxuriating in the softness of his lips.

Our lips press together, firmer:
Our lips press together firmer, more ardent, passion increasing.

Lips part slightly:
I parted my lips slightly, inviting him to explore, to tease me with his tongue.

Tongues touch, tip to tip:
Our tongues pushed out just beyond the teeth, to meet in the middle, touching tip to tip.

his tongue probes my lip, around the top then bottom lip:
His tongues probed my lips, starting outside, then entering my mouth, just slightly, tasting my lips just behind the area you would normally see when lips are pressed together. (Need to find a better way to put this. What are the different areas of the lips called?)

My tongue probes into his mouth, slightly:
My tongue slips into his mouth, the taste of toothpaste still clinging to him, mouthwash freshly used and still giving his breath a bit of a bite, clean, fresh. I feel his teeth against my tongue, then brush just beyond the tip of his tongue. (How is this like penetrating him? My tongue penetrates his mouth, pushing into it, hot need? Another way to describe?)

tongue licks tongue middle:
Our tongues start entwining, feeling each other. I touch the middle of his tongue tentatively with the tip of mine, stimulating his taste centers, so he knows what I taste like.

Tongue licks tongue side:
tongues twist around each other:

I continue exploring his tongue with mine, running over the smooth surface, top, moving to the side, our tongues dance together, hug each other, wrapping around, acrobats in motion.

His tongue leaves:
I feel his tongue leave my mouth, his lips leaving mine.

Sucks my lower lip into mouth:
As his lips move away from mine, he pauses at my lower lip, sucking it gently into his mouth, teasing it playfully.

lets go of lip, kisses below lip:
His kisses travel down, leaving my lips completely, to the area just below my bottom lip (What is this area called?), kissing once before continuing to move downward.

Kisses chin:
He pauses, kissing my chin. (Does he do anything else? Single kiss? Tongue appearing between lips for kiss, lick combination?)

mouth moves to neck:
His mouth hit my neck. (Anything else I can say about this? Just "It is at chin, now it is at neck?)

kisses neck:
He started kissing my neck, lips puckered out.

lick neck:
His tongue slips between his lips, the kiss blending together with his lick. (Is there a name for this?)

suck neck, what does it feel like?:
Removing his tongue, his lips press firmly against my neck. My skin pulls tight, pressure building, as the flesh of my neck is pulled into his mouth.

nibbles neck:
His teeth come down, slightly grazing the skin in his hot mouth, sending tingles through me.

mouth to ear, nibble earlobe:
heavy breath in ear:
He trailed his mouth up my neck, small kisses along the way, until reaching my earlobe. Taking my earlobe into his mouth, he sucks on it, nose breathing heavily in my ear.

can't move, electric tingles:
I am frozen in place, electrified, shaking ever so slightly. (I get wet, how to make transition? Ear nibbling drives me completely wild, almost guaranteed that if you nibble my ear, I will get horny, unless you completely and totally creep me out. How to convey the idea?)

claw his back slightly:
Once I can move again, I run my fingers down his back, clawing it slightly, hearing the gasp from him as I come close to breaking the skin, needing a release from the tingles running up and down my spine before I explode. (Maybe I can put the wetness here? Tell how much I like my ear being nibbled?)

mouth moved back to neck as I run hands up and down back:
As my hands run up and down his back, my tension building as if I am about to burst, his mouth moves back to my neck, down it, then leaves.

kiss moves to shoulder:
He moves over to my shoulder, the same slow, wet, small kisses.

Teeth bite nightie strap, pull off shoulder:
His teeth bite into the strap of my nightie, tugging at it, until it hits the end of my shoulder, and is then pulled over to fall down my arm.

moved to collar bone going across to other shoulder:
His kissed make their way to the other shoulder, across my collar bone.

bites other strap, pulls down:
He takes the other strap with his teeth, again pulling it until it falls off my shoulder, down my arm.

nightie falls down slightly, barely being held up by body pressed to body:
No longer secured on my shoulders, my nightie slipped down slightly, only held up by our horizontal position. (Is there a way to make this sexier?)

mouth moves to chest, above breasts:
His mouth moved, continuing its kisses, to my exposed chest, above my breasts.

kisses all over chest, my hands tangled in his hair:
My hands reached up, entwining his hair, as his kisses continued across my chest.

he pulls nightie, falls further, exposing breasts:
His hands came up, pulling my nightie, down, exposing first the tops of my breasts, the fabric tighter as it pulled down further, over the swell of my breasts, until first one nipple, then the second popped free of the fabric, exposed now to the air, and his eyes. It was pulled down further still, showing the bottom curve of my breasts, where breasts meet rib cage (What is this area called?), to bunch around my ribs, below my breasts, now fully exposed to his watching eyes.

Kisses move to top of breast, side to side:
His kisses moved down from my chest, to the top of my breasts, kissing first the top of one, then the other, back ad forth, downward.

Breast cupped, thumbs stroke nipples:
His hands moved up, cupping the outside curve of my breasts, thumbs moving to cover each nipple, to caress them.

Mouth moves to nipple, while other hand, fingers pinch opposite nipple:
His thumbs left one nipple, to be replaced by his mouth. The opposite nipple was grasped between his thumb and pointer finger, pinched and pulled.

Mouth moved to stomach, hands squeeze breasts:
His moth left, and his hand came back up to my breast. He squeezed my breasts, one in each hand, as he kissed my stomach.

push nighty up, I take off:
Nightie now getting in the way, he pushed it up. No longer needed, I removed his hands from my breasts, pulling my nightie up and over my head, fully exposing my upper body to him with the fabric no longer in the way of the view of my topless body, skin exposed to him completely.

licks belly button, running tongue inside:
His kisses continued, down to my bellybutton. His tongue poked out, between his teeth, and pushed into the sensitive area, licking the edges, then the bottom. Moving around, exploring it.

Hands leave breasts, moving to waist:
His hands leave my breasts (When did he put his hands back on my breasts? After I pulled off my nightie. Need to put back in when he put his hands back on me), running along my sides, causing me to giggle as they tickle my sensitive sides, until they hit my waist.

panties pulled off:
Traveling downward, he caught the edge of my panties, almost as if attempting to keep in touch with my skin, no broken connection, even for the small amount of fabric at the sides of my panties. My panties pulled along with his hands, moving downward, showing the top of my fur, further, my lips becoming visible, at first barely, then completely, the outside, just the topmost part showing as my legs pressed together. He continued pulling them down, knees, ankles, feet, over and off, the panties slipping free from me.

Knees pulled apart, mouth moved to pubis:
As he moved back up, his hands went to my knees, pushing them outward, a slight but insistent pressure, until my legs were spread before him, settling between my spread knees and legs. His mouth was placed against my pubis, licking my thin strip of fur, wet now with his saliva.

Hands moved under, grasping ass cheeks:
His hands moved around to my waste, slightly lower, traveling along my outer ass cheeks, until they firmly held both cheeks, one in each hand.

mouth moves to pussy, kissing outside lips:
Pulling my ass up slightly, hips rotating, his mouth moved down to my spread pussy. His lips continued kissing, lips against lips, exploring my labia majora with his kisses.

tongue pushes into pussy, fingers move up to top, arm around leg, rubbing above clit:
With my legs bent, feet on the bed, knees in the air, his arm wrapped around my leg as his tongue probed my pussy, pushing in deeper. His arms now wrapped around my leg so his hands rested just above my pubis, he moved his fingers downward, until it came into the hood of my clit, running, massaging my clit through its hood.

mouth moved away, other hand fingers inserted in pussy:
His mouth left my pussy, his other hand coming up, pointer and middle finger inserted inside my pussy to replace his now absent tongue.

fingers rub top of vagina, g-spot, other fingers work clit:
His fingers worked their way inside me, rubbing the top of my vaginal canal, until they hit my g-spot, located at the top, pushing towards the belly. His other fingers continued to work my clit through its hood.

Rubbed until climax, tighten up:
He continued working on my pussy and clit, moving the hood until his fingers were in direct contact with my clit, rubbing it, pushing downward and back and forth, while his other fingers worked inside me, rubbing my g-spot, causing me to to thrash as the tension built within me. Rubbing clit, rubbing g-spot, building, more, faster, more, more. I burst, pussy tightening around his fingers, squeezing them, as waves of euphoria rolled over me in my release.

tongue back down, licking pussy opening until very wet with tongue and pussy juices:
Removing his finger from my clit and pulling his other fingers out of my pussy, me moved his head back between my legs. Tongue out, he licked my pussy, getting my labia majora nice and wet, then worked his tongue inside, around my labia minora, tasting my juices, until my pussy was absolutely dripping with saliva and pussy juices.

hips moved up, penis head placed against pussy:
Now, thoroughly wet, he sat up, pulling my hips, shifting his pelvis, until his penis head was placed against my pussy.

legs pulled up, ass slightly above bed:
legs spread, opening pussy wide:
He pulled my legs up, my ass hanging above the bed just slightly, then spread my legs, opening my pussy wide, hungry for his waiting penis.

head rubbed against outside pussy lips:
He rubbed the head of his penis against the outside of my pussy, against the lips, along the slit, up and down, getting the head nice and wet.

worked inside pussy, head barely in, slight push in, pull back, push in, deeper each time until penis all the
way in pussy:
Once his head was wet with our juices, he pushed it inside my hungry pussy. A slight push in, then pull back, lubricating more of his penis with each push, until I swallowed the hole of his shaft, our groins connected together, deep inside.

legs placed over shoulders:
He lifted my legs, putting them against his shoulders, then started pumping into me.

penis pulled out until head barely in, then pushed in all the way to base of shaft:
In slow strokes, he would pull his penis out, until only the head remained buried inside me, then push all the way in, until his shaft was swallowed.

Continue slow removal until head barely in, followed by push in to base of shaft:
He continued thrusting inside me, slowly, almost out, then push back in, the entire length of his penis rubbing against my pussy lips, slowly, deeply.

Faster movements, slapping sound where his sides hit spread legs:
Pushes as far in as he can go:
His hips sped up, the long thrusts happening faster, pounding me, my thighs slapping against his sides, the noise increasing in volume as his breath came deeper. His penis, pounding into me, almost to my cervix, harder, faster, deep inside.

then moves legs to side:
He paused, then shifted his legs outward, until his knees poked through under my knees, giving him better balance.

Arms wrapped around torso, like hug:
He laid down on top of me, wrapping his arms around me, giving me a hug, holding me tightly against him.

Lifts up, his ass resting on feet, me on top:
With me in his arms, he sat up, pulling me up with him until his ass rested on his heels. I stayed there, ebraced in his arms, on top of him, his penis still inside me, spearing my pussy.

sucks nipple, I ride:
Arms still around me, holding me to him:
He shifted his head down, finding access to my nipples, his arms still holding me against him. My hips started gyrating.

Move my hips first up and down, then back and forth:
I moved my hips up and down, feeling his penis move in and out of my pussy, then sat down, keeping him deeply inside me. Then I shifted my hips back and forth, moving them first towards him, then away from him.

Start moving circles:
Getting into it more, I shifted my hips not only back and forth, but side to side, until my hips moved in small circles, feeling his penis shift around, inside me, stimulating all areas.

more frantic, moved hips back and forth faster:
The motions in my pussy felt wonderful, pushing me further. I wanted him so badly. I wanted to climax again. My breath quickened, and lust overwhelmed me, my hips moving faster with my want, my need, my desire.

soon almost pop out, riding hard, until climax:
My hips moved quickly, frantically. In my passion, sometimes it was just back and forth, or I would lift my hips up and down, or side to side. Other times, I kept my circles going, so frantically. His penis almost popped out, my actions no longer controlled, my senses driven wild. I was an animal, in heat, wanting nothing more than to ride him until I collapsed, until I was fulfilled. Sweat beading our brows, my legs getting sore from pushing our bodies almost to the point of breaking, it finally hit me. I climaxed again, my pussy tightening down on his penis, shaking in his arms, my mind empty of thought, consumed only by the bliss running through my body, almost too painful.

lays me down:
Once I finished, calming enough, he picked me up, laid me down beneath him.

kisses:
Keeping his penis pushed in firmly, he kissed me, mouth, tongue to tongue, cheeks, neck, breasts. He showered my upper body in kisses while he remained motionless below, letting his penis soak in the feel of my pussy wrapped around it. Letting me bask in the feel of his lips all over my hot, sweaty flesh.

His hips move slowly at first, picking up speed:
Then, his hips started their movement. Slow thrust in, deeply, then back out, in, out, again, again.

slap of stomach to stomach, sides to legs, movements faster:
His movements sped up, until the sound of our flesh could be heard, slapping together, making naughty noises. Our stomachs, his side against my inner thighs, slap, slap, faster, the tempo picking up.

thrusts shorten, speed up, pounding into me:
tongues motionless, breathing hard into each others mouths:
His tongue went motionless in my mouth, his entire being focused on his hips, their movements. His thrusts shortened, speeding up, becoming quicker, urgent, his tension building. Our breaths came in ragged pulls, almost panting, as he sped up more.

His body jerks slightly:
Finally, he pushed in, shuddering slightly, pulled out,t hen back in, shuddering again.

thrust again a couple more times, jerk:
cums into pussy:
His body shuttered one last time, as he pushed his penis in as deeply as it would go, as he jerked slighty, his hot cum filling the inside of my pussy.


Stops moving, holds me:
He lay there, hips between my thighs, penis inside me, breathing heavily. We held each other tight, locked in an embrace.

penis getting soft, stays in until completely soft, falls out:
plays with nipples and kisses until soft penis pops out:
I could feel his penis soften up, slowly pulling back, until it was too soft to remain inside. He kissed me and played with my nipples a bit while he softened, until at last it popped out of my pussy, to soft to be able to stay inside.

feel cum leaking out, down perineum, into ass crack:
With his penis now gone, and my pussy no longer plugged, I felt his cum, just a little, leak out of me, dripping down, underneath my pussy, running down my perineum, until I felt it leak down the crack of my ass.

He gets up, goes to shower to wash:
He got up, went to the restroom to wash his saliva, cum, pussy juice covered penis off with the shower.

comes back, kisses me:
Cum leaks down leg:
As he came back, passing me on my way to the restroom, he kissed me, smiling shyly, while his cum dripped down my leg.

I go to shower, wash:
I went to the shower, turned it on, waited for it to warm up as I felt his sticky cum dripping down, leaving a slimy trail down my inner thigh.

water first down ass crack, wash cum from there:
I grabbed the shower, shifting my arm around until the head was pointed at my ass. (Better way to describe? Arm behind my back, aiming shower at my ass, right at top, so water was flowing directly between my cheeks) My other hand snaked around, running along the crack of my pass, then working its way inside as I ran my fingers up and down, across my anus, washing out the cum that had leaked there, paying attention to my anus (Maybe a little bit too much attention. How to portray fingering my anus a little?)

Open pussy slightly, run water inside:
I brought the shower head around again, spreading my legs, then put the nozzle next to my pussy entrance. Spreading the entrance open, I felt the warm water rush inside my pussy, cleaning out the cum. (A way to make this more erotic?)

water over pussy surface, then down legs:
Once cleaned out, I ran the water over the surface, washing the outer lips of my pussy, then focused on my legs, to wash away the excess cu that had leaked down them, and the slimy trail it has made while oozing down my leg.

Go back to bed, lay down, cuddle  until he sleeps then I turn over, go to sleep:
Nice and clean, I toweled off, then headed back to bed. Putting back on my panties and nightie, I snuggled up next to him, caressing his face, occasionally kissing his cheek, until I could feel the deep breaths of sleep. With that, I turned over, a smile on my face, and went to sleep myself, to dream my naughty dreams.